Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts
Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts

11 September 2009

Connections

This painting is an extension of the systems of chance printmaking project. In continuation of the theme, I randomly selected one of my Facebook friends and asked her to supply me with what she thought was the best photo she had ever taken. This image, of a child on the streets of India, was the result.


Untitled, A1 dimensions
Oil paint on paper
Painted September 2009

Some things that I need to work on (courtesy of today's critique session): the transition from dark to light is too abrupt, especially on the left shoulder. The colours are a bit overdone, especially on the clothing where things get a bit confusing. The folds themselves aren't especially well done. That jutting vertical line in particular irks me.

Overall, however, it was a fun painting to do that came together quickly and easily. Plus, I enjoyed the constructive criticism. It's all stuff that I agree with and would like to incorporate into my work moving forward.