Untitled, A1 dimensions
Oil paint on paper
Painted September 2009
Oil paint on paper
Painted September 2009
Some things that I need to work on (courtesy of today's critique session): the transition from dark to light is too abrupt, especially on the left shoulder. The colours are a bit overdone, especially on the clothing where things get a bit confusing. The folds themselves aren't especially well done. That jutting vertical line in particular irks me.
Overall, however, it was a fun painting to do that came together quickly and easily. Plus, I enjoyed the constructive criticism. It's all stuff that I agree with and would like to incorporate into my work moving forward.
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